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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 27 November 2018

Report On Data


Room 10 did a survey about what they think about each subjects the subjects that we voted for were P.E AKA (Physical Education) Maths,writing,reading,art,music,inquiry and home learning. The most subject That had the most likes was P.E.

Monday, 5 November 2018

The Forgotten Village

The story begins in a village where not even the bats land their droppings in that village lived elves and gnomes, they lived a happy life in a forgotten village. Each year on a special day the sun shines bright amongst them and they can do anything while the sun is out but when the sun turns black it turns back to a dark life. Another year comes and the special time is near the elves and gnomes have been preparing for this day for months but when the day arrived the sun never shone a single bit. Later that evening the elves and gnomes noticed that some of their people were starting to disappear. The next day the elves and gnomes gathered around the oak tree they knew something had to be done so they came to father elf and mother gnome so father elf  searched in the library and found out where to go to find a way to solve the problem. In the clouds high in the air fly high with the doves and you will find the keeper of the potions so the elves and the gnomes were on a journey to find the keeper of the potions to find out where the sun is and where their people are. Finally the elves had found the keeper of the potions her house was extremely big and looked like it was abonded. They knocked on the door and she answered it and said greetings little creatures. What are your names we replied with elves and gnomes at your service but she just laughed and said elves and gnomes how ridiculous hahaha that can’t be true I mean elves and gnomes come on. Would anyone want tea she said so she made us tea inside her house her hallway was full of boxes her bathroom were filled with clothes and her kitchen was full of animals oh and her dreadful living room it was full of rubbish. We sat down and drank our tea she liked it we all spat it out because it was so cold the tea. She says she drinks cold drinks and eats cold food and never turns on the light because she hasn't paid her electricity in a years. So she asked why have you come we told her that the people have started disappearing our village and that the sun never came on our special day but she just said where is your village we said below and she said below are you from that dark village and we said yes and she just said oh no that village doesn't even exist. Help us please we’ll do anything to make you help us well if you want my help you will be my slave what your salve yes that is the only way and  if you don't take my help you will all be forgotten. So we agreed and she said good now go and get me the ingredients to bring back your people these are the ingredients mud,frogs that croak,mushrooms and sand dust. So the gnomes and elves were on a journey but back at the village more and more people were disappearing. The gnomes and elves spread out the elves had to get mushrooms and frogs that croak the gnomes had to get mud and sand dust. We came back and gave it to the keeper of the positions and she put the ingredient in one by one. When it was ready she said right go and sprinkle it everywhere in your outside they came back but the keeper of the position took them back to the village she came back and said go and get the last ingredients and she said go and get milk from the cow wool from the sheep and a squeeze of lemon juice. They used the same stradey again the elves milk the cow and the gnomes get wool form the sheep and lemon juice. We brought it back to the keeper of the position and she put the ingredients in one by one. When it was ready she threw it high in the air and the sun came back and we all cheered and said yay we're going home but the keeper of the positions said no one's going home because we made a deal get all of your buddies make the sun come back and then your mine so because you tried to leave you are all my slave so go home and get your buddies and come here if you don’t come back by midnight I will turn you into a ghost and she blew them away. The elves and gnomes got back and reunited with their village and they even hosted a party but after the party they did not return and when the clock turned to midnight the keeper of the positions appeared and turned into a witch she came down and squeezed her hand and just as she stopped the elves and gnomes were ghost the witch returned back home with her ghost. The next day the with found a terrible discovery that humans were born and that they were moving into her town that they she ordered her ghost to go back and get every single elf and gnome there is when that happend she turned them into ghost. Her town was not lonely anymore she saw humans and one day when they elected their mayor the witch came out and squeezed her hand until boom the mayor and the royals turned into sand. The witch saw all the people scream and cry she tried to turn them into statues but suddenly her powers were not working anymore then she suddenly started to feel weird until one day the humans all gathered round her because she was sick she spent her last days watching horror movies and eat brains and drinking blood then one night she passed away. The witch passed away and a week later her ghost turned into human skeletons and was sent to the second life and the humans now have a special time in year called elma where the skeletons come back and visit them now the humans believe that when they die they will meet the skeletons in the second life.

Thursday, 25 October 2018

My Life In The Digital World

My life in the digital world, this is my life in the digital world it has all the apps or objects I go on. Some of these apps give you positive information and some gives you negative information that is why sometimes the digital world has good information and sometimes bad.

Monday, 15 October 2018

Reflections On Term 3 goals

I have achieved my reading goal
I have not achieved my writing goal because I still haven't improved on writing neatly.
I have not achieved math goal because I did not learn my timetables.


Monday, 23 July 2018

Term 3 Goals

Reflections On Term 2 Goals




I achieved my reading goal because I read clearly and independently.

I achieved my writing goal because I wrote as much as I can and sounded out words.
I did not achieve my maths goal because I did not ask more questions on the mat or learn my 4 or 6 timetables.

Tuesday, 22 May 2018

The Virus Of Ebola

Hello agent Jones said Mr Askew you are going on a mission to fight the impossible and stop the virus of Ebola. Your first stop is Bollywood,India. I need three people I'll take Amy,Terry and Perry. Amy and Perry stay here and guard I said also look out encase you or I get Ebola. Terry you come and find some healing plant and also make our plan. Terry said ok and so we headed.


When I arrived I could see so many people sick  and not so many people happy. I had no idea the virus was as worse I saw a old man who manged to fight the Ebola virus I said how did the Ebola virus get here he explained it started last week on a Friday we all went to the market to get food and monkeys started attacking people then people turned around and killed the monkeys the blood of the monkey was all over the people when they got home they started getting sick and Ebola started spreading around the town. Those people who got the Ebola virus had vomited and sadly passed away after one week of having Ebola.
                                                             

 Now I was off to get something to heal this virus. I walked along a path and found the old Indian healing plant it was called two of a kind because there was only two of the plant if you took both of them there will be no more of the plant two of a kind. I got one of the flower and healed everyone else and the whole town let me have the plant two of a kind.

Monday, 7 May 2018

In my holidays

On the second Saturday on the 28th April we had my uncles 21st birthday celebration. First we decorated the hall me my mum,dad,2 sisters,2 brothers and my other uncle and aunty. We blowed some balloons up and put some marbles on the table we also put covers on the tables. 


Next we went home and started getting ready and started cooking we made some potatoes salad and crab salad my grandpa made curry and chopsuey. My aunty arrived home with the key and she got all the tapas and mats ready. after we were ready it was time to leave to the hall when we arrived we waited outside the hall because there was a rugby meeting. 


When we went in the hall we layed the tapas and mats on the floor and we put the cake and the key on top of the tapa. next we set the food in the kitchen. Later on family and friends started arriving. The photo booth was set up and next the celebration started. The first thing we did was wait for my uncle the birthday boy and his girlfriend to arrive so we can surprise him. Before my uncle saw us he was blind folded and when he took off his blind fold all the lights went off and we all said surprise!!! out loud.



When my uncle saw my aunty,uncle,grandpa and my dad he hugged them and cried. He was happy to see the picture of my nana. After that we did a prayer and we gave my uncle his key and my grandpa gave my uncle a carving my nana wanted to give to him. Next we gave my uncles cake to his aunty we gave the top layer and we gave blankets,mats and tapas. Later on they were serving food and next the dances. The first dance was my sister after my sister was my cousin and next my other cousin. when I went to the bar man he said Im wasting my money because I bought 2 chocolate bars 1 chips and 6 cokes but I said I can afford it. Finally we prayer and finished the celebration the last thing that happend was that my uncle had to drink 10 bottles of beer.

Now I felt happy and I wish It could have been bigger and longer the celebration also I wish that there was more food.

Monday, 30 April 2018

Reflection on Term 1 goals

Reading:
My reading goal is to read every day at home with expression.

Achieved because I read every day and I used expression.

Writing:
My writing goal is to use punctuation marks in my writing and to add more details also to write neatly.

Almost because I only used some of my goals.

Maths:
My maths goal is to ask more questions on the mat and learn all my timetables.

Needs Work because I talk too much on the mat.

Wednesday, 28 March 2018

How to get to my favourite place

Steps
1.  First drive straight up Pt England dairy.
2.  Now turn on Erima Avenue go ahead until the pooland round about.
3. Then turn left again on Taniwha street go past two church's and kindergarten.
4. Again turn right on Farringdon road and get ready to turn again.
5. Finally turn on Wimbledon street go right ahead and stop at number 28 Wimbledon street.

How to get to a new destanation

Maps
I am going to tell you about my map.


1. First take 16 steps forward from the concrete wall.
2. Next take 11 steps diagonal to the left and face the staff room.
3. Now walk 22 steps forward, keep going diagonal.
4. Then go 12 steps forward.
5. Again  take 15 steps.
6. Go straight 10 steps forward now.
7. Now head 11 steps ahead.
8. Finally walk 7 steps forward and turn right also take one step and you have reached your destination 

I learned how to write instructions and how to write a procedural. I also learned sometimes you need to make your instructions clear.

Tuesday, 8 August 2017

Why we need to get our tools ready

Welcome to my writing on how why we need to get our tools ready.I am going to use first,next and finally I am going to write reasons about why we need to get our tools ready.


My first reason is we need to get our tools ready so we can get pencils,pens,books and rubbers so we can write with and so we can write on also so be can rub out mistakes.


My next reason is we need to get our tools ready so we can draw with and we can color with also we can mark our work and we can draw on.


My last reason is we need to get our tools ready so we can use them all the time.